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Nov 27, 2005 18:50:52 GMT -5
Post by jessiree on Nov 27, 2005 18:50:52 GMT -5
everyday all day long she studied hard she studied long working perfectly in sure silence until the day she SNAPPED! she went to school shot the walls as people ran she walked through the halls picking of people that had put her down blood splashed upon her crown she grinned in pleasure as they cried in plea they knew only now that she had gone mad but as so many screamed she just laughed until her only FRIEND came along and she turned around she raised the gun then put it down and raised it again preparing to start her work again yet still there was her friend her friend took her gun and shot her down she fell flat upon the ground with a pool of blood spattered around her only friend dropped the gun and knelt down crying they waited there as the noise died down in sure silence with no one around
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Nov 27, 2005 19:53:04 GMT -5
Post by Jeni on Nov 27, 2005 19:53:04 GMT -5
oh my gosh...
this is so sad, it's beautifully written, there is no doubt about that,
great write, thank you for sharing
~Jeni
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Dec 5, 2005 14:25:25 GMT -5
Post by *GoThIc_FairY* on Dec 5, 2005 14:25:25 GMT -5
i like this poem. Its very interesting!! well bye! got to go to class..
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Dec 6, 2005 15:00:26 GMT -5
Post by jessiree on Dec 6, 2005 15:00:26 GMT -5
thanks i am glad that it is intresting to someone thanks for commenting
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