That's All I Need

[americanclassicx3]

you're making me feel so bad and these emotions are already so severe
every problem i have just comes out as another tear
everything you say is only deepening my fear
i need so badly for someone to be here

all i can think about is how much i want you to care
you promised you'd always be here to talk, but i looked and you weren't there
all i need is to feel loved right now - the way you're treating me isnt fair
my heart is made of paper and every word you speak creates another tear

i just need you to tell me you love me - i swear, that's all i need
you've already planted so much hurt in me, and these words you say just water another seed
i'm in a race, but my problems are taking the lead
and without your love and care, there are impossible to beat

[*GoThIc_FairY*]

wow.. i really like this poem.. i can really relate to it. I feel the emotions and everything coming out in ur writing

[arcanephantom]

damn! your having a lot of friendship problems. i dont know if this is the same friend or different ones but this is the third painful one ive read. i like the underlineing, bold, and italics you did in the poem. its just kinda pointing out the important and most emotionally connected points of the poem out to the reader which i think is important. such a fragile poem but with such strength to it however helpless it may appear. nice job andi hope thing even out in thew end.
deidre

[arcanephantom]

oh and if you do 4 more posts you get 'a shard' instead of 'i've been around'
deidre