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Post by americanclassicx3 on Jan 5, 2006 23:42:32 GMT -5
mirror, mirror on the wall who is the one loved by all?
mirror, mirror this just can't be the one they love is no longer me!
inch by inch, they break me down never stopping until i hit the ground i go down screaming, but they don't hear a sound can lost love ever truly be found?
a plastic smile covers up the pain on the outside - sun / on the inside - rain but every "i love you" pulls the chain and my sorrows quickly go down the drain
idk if i like that one =/
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Post by *GoThIc_FairY* on Jan 6, 2006 1:12:22 GMT -5
well i like it ! yay
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Post by mikethelemming on Jan 7, 2006 5:53:24 GMT -5
i like this poem. "a plastic smile covers up the pain" -this is a concept i have used and seen many times before and it's always very effective. it was a nice touch in this poem. nice write, i enjoyed this
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