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Post by mikethelemming on Jan 18, 2006 0:07:24 GMT -5
What do you do When the world crushed you And the people you depend on Have become so few? What do you do? Oh, what do you do?
Your best friend Turns on you, With so much as a "Fuck you!" What a friend I have been To deserve such treatment.
The girl you love Hates everything you stand for. Her heart is with a man Who's twice the man, for sure. How can I compare To someone who doesn't even care?
Your try to prove them wrong- Everyone that doubts who you are, But you'll never succeed, Never shine as a star. I'll never be ok, Losing everyday.
I prayed for hope I prayed for help. I prayed for heaven Or a safe haven. But I'm still here, Forever, I fear.
When it all comes down What do you do? You do what I do, Cower and hide, As no one's on your side, With only destroyed pride To rock you to sleep.
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Post by mikethelemming on Jan 18, 2006 0:10:11 GMT -5
i wrote this a while ago, taintedlove may remember this. i thought this might appeal to an audience such as the audience here.
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Post by *GoThIc_FairY* on Jan 18, 2006 0:10:39 GMT -5
I like this poem a lot! I can really relate especially with the part about trying to prove them wrong.. - that is how i totally feel.. Well- great work!
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Post by jessiree on Jan 18, 2006 19:24:02 GMT -5
i really love this poem and yes i can relate ...... great write
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Post by mikethelemming on Jan 22, 2006 6:06:32 GMT -5
thanks you two. i'm glad you liked it.
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