In This Dungeon Of Terror And Pain

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In this dungeon I rely on myself.
Strapped to the wall;
Caught in a cage.
I will not let myself go.
In this dungeon I scream in horror.
The pain of uncertainty tears at my heart.
In this dungeon of feelings,
I am swallowed by a whirlpool.
Mixed feelings taunt me.
I try to snatch them,
But they’re not there.
I hear myself whispering in my ear.
I feel my hand raking through my hair.
I see myself smiling at me.
I am scared; my heart pounds.
“Fear, Terror, Uncertainty, Pain
Happiness, Love, and Comfort.”
I whisper to myself.
I feel my hand on the knife,
I look to my hand and nothing is there.
I feel the blade slicing through my flesh.
I feel the pain,
See the blood oozing from my wounds.
In this dungeon I was thrown,
With my hands my very own.
I’ve betrayed myself, to teach myself a lesson.
Death squeezes at my heart.
Then I’m back at the start.
Forever in this cycle of pain,
Fear flowing through my every vein,
In this dungeon of terror and pain.

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