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Post by jessiree on Jan 4, 2006 22:27:25 GMT -5
great write
i really like how you do the before and after
and do everyones thoughts individual
really great write
~Jess
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Post by jessiree on Jan 5, 2006 19:38:57 GMT -5
lol
yeah i can write unless it just comes to me lol
later
~Jess
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Post by arcanephantom on Feb 12, 2006 7:03:37 GMT -5
amazing! very professionally written. and i agree, the before and after sex was a nice thing to put in there. i'm really impressed. it flowed in the most divine manner, it kept the redaer's full attention (and not just b/c it was girl-on-girl or erotic). one of my personal favorites (most likely on a list of many:D)
deidre
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