The Colors Of My Life

[*GoThIc_FairY*]

Beyond the black and white..
she flies off into the night
comes to find the shades of blue
she needs to be rescued by you
Next, everything changes to red
and everything she once knew feels dead
as more time goes by
all the colors fade to gray
her life flashes right before her eyes
and she falls to her knees and prays ...

Its not finished, but what do you think so far?

[*GoThIc_FairY*]

Hey, what does everybody think about this poem? is it any good? I am just wondering..