I've Lost Myself

[iceman81588]

I’ve lost the me
The I, the reason why
That am here, fear
Life this time
There’s no more , or , or even .
shed a tear, tonight, inside.

Where have gone?
‘m all alone
Ruling no kingdom from throne
Walking forever, but find no home

seek the truth,
The proof, that am real
Don’t know why, , am so alone
For without you, I am good as gone.

[arcanephantom]

for me, this poem is one of complete hopelessness and despair. it seems as if this poem is like a farewell to life. not physically dying, but emotionally, functionally dying. just completely shutting all doors, any entrance into the self is blocked off and dormant. i think perhaps it could have been described in greater depth and been a lot more interesting. the idea holds so much potential for a masterpiece. the writing could be improved upon. it is mediocre in my eyes as of now but its only one opinion.
deidre