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Nov 26, 2005 17:41:39 GMT -5
Post by fairbanks on Nov 26, 2005 17:41:39 GMT -5
Dark skies far distant cries, destructive path with all its wrath! Nature calls city stalls, buildings tall buildings fall, lights have gone I look upon, homes crushed turn to dust. Fires blaze I stop to gaze roaring skies with vengeful eyes! Defences battered prayers unanswered, city of water with all its slaughter! Days of thunder I often wonder, mass destruction more construction, sunken wrecks abandon decks, Massive waves lives to save. Bolt of light that sudden fright, fearful eyes those darken skies! End is here, storm has past another direction moving fast. Beginning of the end hopeful task, next destination it stops to ask?
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Storm.
Nov 26, 2005 20:21:23 GMT -5
Post by Jeni on Nov 26, 2005 20:21:23 GMT -5
I liked it, i really do,
i did have to read it twice however, for it to make total sense,
But i still liked it
~thanks for joining
~Love ~Jeni
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Dec 1, 2005 1:28:40 GMT -5
Post by *GoThIc_FairY* on Dec 1, 2005 1:28:40 GMT -5
I really like your poem! good job.. I found it very interesting. Different from all the other poems i have read so far.. great job!
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Dec 4, 2005 6:16:40 GMT -5
Post by arcanephantom on Dec 4, 2005 6:16:40 GMT -5
You really personified the sky. It had eyes even. 'eyes of a storm', makes sense. And you displayed it as quite wrathful. Nicely written. deidre
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