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Post by jessiree on Nov 27, 2005 2:38:05 GMT -5
;Da dream... a wonderful thinga goal... an inspringing thing yet they laugh at us they laugh at the dreamers and the ones with goals so we either give up or stand stronger stronger against the waves of purepresser while they eat away at useroding us little by little until we are so brittle we snap or by then we can dream bigger or make more goals just to prove them wrong, incorrect,stupĀid for not beliving we could they will defeat many while others bulid stronger walls walls not of stone but of more dreams and more goals which in the eye of the beholder could be weakened or strenghted you are the beholder so do you fold,surrender to the waves or do you stand stronger and fight even the biggest tidel waves for you are the dreamer for you have all the goals and it is up to you weather you reach them,fail trying, or give up even before you begin
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Post by alexeiogrodov on Nov 28, 2005 15:36:48 GMT -5
I can relate... Alex
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Post by jessiree on Nov 28, 2005 19:59:38 GMT -5
thanks for your comments!
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Post by alexeiogrodov on Nov 28, 2005 20:24:25 GMT -5
You are welcome... Someone has to start commenting, hasn't he? LOL Alex
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Post by jessiree on Nov 28, 2005 20:57:26 GMT -5
yup glad you did lol:D
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Post by arcanephantom on Feb 19, 2006 18:36:59 GMT -5
beautiful! and what a nice topic. the dreamers are the ones who are brave enough to think big and some become great prodigies and insirations to those who follow after. what a wonderful little poem. inspiring indeed. there's only one 'Happy' poem. well is that depressing or what? deidre
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Post by *GoThIc_FairY* on Feb 24, 2006 16:50:23 GMT -5
really good poem! lol, i havent commented on the only 'happy' poem on here! but good job!
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