celtrasa
I've been around
Whos the real me?
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Jun 17, 2006 4:18:26 GMT -5
Post by celtrasa on Jun 17, 2006 4:18:26 GMT -5
You make me cry, You make me vomit, You make me wish i had Never been born. Dragging the blade Through my skin, I just watch as the Floor turns red. Taking your hand, Smearing my blood My smile turns wider As you turn and run. Its not that easy, You can't escape. I plan to rip you apart Like you did me.
(title help would be apreciated too)
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Jun 18, 2006 16:32:08 GMT -5
Post by *GoThIc_FairY* on Jun 18, 2006 16:32:08 GMT -5
I like this one a lot, so dark....and yeah! Its really good. I am not good at titles, so i can't really help you there, but its a great poem
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Jul 7, 2006 4:32:46 GMT -5
Post by lucaspackard on Jul 7, 2006 4:32:46 GMT -5
you cant escape
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