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Post by *GoThIc_FairY* on Nov 27, 2005 20:02:25 GMT -5
scars
black and red
are all over me, even on my head
scars
long and wide
scars
are no longer easy to hide
scars
for loves bid farewell
scars
put life through hell
scars
for every mistake
scars
for every time my heart would break
scars
are like a gun to the head
scars
are for the times i would rather be dead
scars
dark and wide
scars
are no longer easy to hide
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Post by jessiree on Nov 27, 2005 20:34:29 GMT -5
great write i really enjoyed reading it your word flow very well keep writting  -jess |
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Post by americanclassicx3 on Nov 28, 2005 22:30:42 GMT -5
i love it. it's really easy to relate to, which is always a bonus!
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Post by bedofrazors on Dec 4, 2005 9:27:13 GMT -5
yeah i can relate to what your talking about...and its a really good poem...keep writing ..im looking forward to reading more...
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Post by *GoThIc_FairY* on Dec 16, 2005 21:38:21 GMT -5
Ok. sweet. im glad u liked it
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Post by arcanephantom on Dec 25, 2005 6:40:11 GMT -5
damn right, they're hard to hide. but once everyone knows the scars are merely the past and a part of you. great poem. i enjoyed. much thruth was displayed here and emtion portrayed,
deidre
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