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Post by americanclassicx3 on Nov 27, 2005 20:57:12 GMT -5
Pink ballet flats and a kitchen knife Who would've known that she's the type To carve her broken heart into her skin Hoping to forget the acheing within Her mascara is black and so is her mind The more she looks for love, the less she finds Under her designer jeans she wears wounds and scars Her heart's been broken 7 times so far All she needs is to love without getting attached After all, abercrombie and blood don't match
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Post by jessiree on Nov 27, 2005 21:13:09 GMT -5
"abercrombie and blood don't match" this is really clever and alittle humorous no matter how sad it is good poem
-jess
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Post by *GoThIc_FairY* on Nov 29, 2005 21:59:15 GMT -5
I really like this poem! It like makes me relate to the person in the poem!
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Post by arcanephantom on Dec 25, 2005 7:18:19 GMT -5
oh wow! An extremely clever poem. It flowed so well, superbly written. I really like your poems. They are well put together. Always loved by me. Continue on your writing way. deidre
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Post by americanclassicx3 on Dec 31, 2005 2:34:23 GMT -5
aww!! your comments make me soo happy!! hehe thank you so much <33
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