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Post by Friday on Dec 9, 2005 0:11:22 GMT -5
Cradle the sin in the once loved skin, Weep softly for your final torture As the blood lust slowly settles, Save me from my crying self, Save me from my dying self, Leave me to the howling wolves, Claws sink into the once opened wound, This trembling flesh is no more, But the tears still caress the wind,
The heart beats more breathlessly, And the trembling is tamed, By the beast soon to be released, From its prison of flesh, Blood and bone will never hold, And the red begins to pool,
Hold fast to your dying saviour, Who never really loved you; Set free your screaming failure, As the Red Sea parts once more, You will choke on those lovely lies, This deception of the desecrated Will never cease.
Friday
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Post by *GoThIc_FairY* on Dec 12, 2005 14:17:57 GMT -5
Hey i really like this poem good job!
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Post by arcanephantom on Dec 25, 2005 6:49:04 GMT -5
As I read all I could think was 'Damn, this is good' and 'Please stay this good'. I have loved your poetry so much. You're truly a talented writer with so much to say. Descriptions and wrting style is just marvelous. I love your work. deidre
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