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Secrets
Dec 13, 2005 0:59:18 GMT -5
Post by Friday on Dec 13, 2005 0:59:18 GMT -5
Peel back the flesh to the lies within, Clutch the steel to confess your sin, Step by step the blood will pour, And lies will spout forever more, Hidden within a lovers touch, This deceit is just too much, Take your death and silent lie, Raise your wrist to the red-blue sky, Just one more slight of hand, To silence the ever growing demand, Clench the fist and stop the vein, Hands shake with unknown pain, Whispered tears begin to fall, As the mouth works its silent call, The silence dies its final death, Nothing left of the once warm breath.
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Secrets
Dec 13, 2005 1:07:48 GMT -5
Post by *GoThIc_FairY* on Dec 13, 2005 1:07:48 GMT -5
Oh wow. All i can say it wow.. i really like this poem! great job
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Secrets
Dec 25, 2005 6:43:24 GMT -5
Post by arcanephantom on Dec 25, 2005 6:43:24 GMT -5
Marvelous. Just beautifully, professionally written. It was divine. It flowed wonderfully. deidre
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