pain of a mother

[jessiree]

[glow=red,2,300]the pain is good
it makes the hate
love
and fear
all disappear
i watch it as it bleeds
cleaning it up as it reaches my knee
i make my last cut
and put the razor away
pull my pants up
wipe my eyes
and i'm on my way
out the door
my legs are all scared
from fights with her
i leave
watching her as she just gleams
never knowing how muh pain
she really caused me[/glow]

[*GoThIc_FairY*]

oh my gosh.. i like this poem alot. I can feel the pain like.come alive.. LoL. i doht know how to explain it! but its really good.

[jessiree]

thanks
i wrote this on after a fight i got in with my mom the other day
so i'm glad to hear people like it

[Jeni]

i also like it,and i can relate so much....


great job.

Love
Jeni

[jessiree]

thanks
i like to get comments on my poems

[arcanephantom]

genius. i can just see the blood run down the leg as you describe it going down to the knee. reminds me so much of past experiences. the poem comes alive.
deidre