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Post by jessiree on Nov 27, 2005 1:03:34 GMT -5
why do friends always have to go? why do i never hear my voice alone? why do humans destroy all? why are natures words always lost? why do we ask "why" when we know "why" is just a question that no one knows. why do friends always have to go? and why can't you people see that within humor lies woe? can you comprehend? do you understand? enough of the questions. how bout' some sentences that can mend? let's begin. no matter how often you find woe there is always humor for one to own. wether you care to look for it or not it's there. look around and you'll see the things that haunt you can be more humorous than they seem.
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Post by Jeni on Nov 27, 2005 14:48:00 GMT -5
i love it, but as for the name, i'm not sure, as you can tell by my poems titles, i'm not very good at that part
but i do think that the title should be somthing that contrdicts itself, maybe and oxymoron, or somthing
i don't know,, it's just a suggestion
love Jeni
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Post by jessiree on Nov 27, 2005 18:02:53 GMT -5
thanks i like the idea of a contradicting oxymoron:)
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Post by Friday on Nov 30, 2005 22:26:50 GMT -5
Well the first thing that popped into my head was "Nature's Questions" since a lot of it, obviously, revolves around questions, just an idea. The poem is wonderful -nods-
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Post by jessiree on Dec 21, 2005 3:02:06 GMT -5
i like that thanks
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Post by arcanephantom on Jan 7, 2006 10:24:10 GMT -5
i really did like it. inquiring minds... the best you can find. perhaps "Inquiries" but i loved it. deidre
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