what would be a good title ?

[*GoThIc_FairY*]

Hi. I have this poem... but dont know the name yet! can anyone help?

[glow=red,2,300]his deep brown eyes
his heart of gold
his precious hands
i would hold

his big bright smile
his beautiful brown hair
his heart full of love
id always wear
and i would hold it high
for all the world to see

he is more than just looks
he is beautiful on the outside
but even more beautiful within

if he gave me his heart
than i would win

but now his eyes,
his hands,
his small and
all he has within is gone
just like that
he dissapeared without a second thought.[/glow]
- also i think it needs some tweeking..

[arcanephantom]

"Evanescent Love"
i think it needs no tweaking. i thought it was beautiful and you perfectly captured the idea i think you had in mind. very dreamlike and sweet with a soft, sorrowful end.
deidre

[*GoThIc_FairY*]

i reallly like that title! Thanks