Hmm.. need a good title~

[*GoThIc_FairY*]

staring out the window
looking into the blackness
and the lonely street
I'm alone..
again..
nobody bothered to call
they dont know how i lock myself inside my room
and hope for this all to end
i no longer have a friend
i no longer have someone to confide in
there is no longer someone there
how can you say im being unfair
when you are unaware
of my tears
of my fears
and of my pain
of the shattered peices lying on teh floor
you never stop
you just think i will beg for more
more pain
more tears
more torture..

[mikethelemming]

i really like this one. this is probably one of my favourite poems that you've written. another great ending, which i think defines a poem. those first four lines were also very good because it really got me interested, which is important to captivate the reader and get them "hooked". but of course we can't forget the good stuff in the middle.
overall a great poem.

no name huh...i can't really help with that. i think that's where a lot of my poems lack in depth and character.

[*GoThIc_FairY*]

Thanks, i am glad you liked this one! I think my best ones come when they are like the most personal... you know? Well, that is alright about the title.... I will keep thinking on that and maybe someone else will know?