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Post by jessiree on Nov 26, 2005 16:56:50 GMT -5
YOU TURN, YOU TWIST, YOU AWAKE , FROM YOUR SLEEP, ONLY TO FIND YOU'RE LOST OR ATLEAST YOU APPEAR TO BE "WHERE TO GO?" "WHAT TO DO?" THESE QUESTIONS ALL FLOOD IN YOUR MIND SO YOU BEGIN TO WONDER IN SEARCH, FOR WHAT YOU DO NOT YET RELIZE BUT FOR EVERY DOOR YOU OPEN TWO MORE CLOSE SO YOU BEGIN FALLING ONLY TO AWAKE AND FIND ... WE ARE ONLY LOST IN OUR OWN MINDS
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Post by Sarah on Nov 26, 2005 18:29:04 GMT -5
Wow so true good job
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Post by Jeni on Nov 26, 2005 21:51:54 GMT -5
i agree, so true, i loved every single word
Love ~Jeni
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Post by *GoThIc_FairY* on Dec 5, 2005 14:12:39 GMT -5
i like this poem! I like the.. we are lost in our own minds part. brilliant!
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Post by alexeiogrodov on Dec 5, 2005 15:35:25 GMT -5
Why did you post it here, in this section? These are the thoughts adults have too. Well done. Alex
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Post by jessiree on Dec 6, 2005 14:56:45 GMT -5
because i don't know they do i'm not there yet! lol thanks for commenting
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Post by Sarah on Dec 26, 2005 17:31:13 GMT -5
I like this poem.Great job! It holds real meaning.Keep writing!
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Post by jessiree on Dec 27, 2005 0:38:19 GMT -5
thanks people i love comments
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