No Criticism Allowed

[americanclassicx3]

I never do anything right - i try to work out a problem, i end up in a fight
i try to act kind, but apparently i'm impolite
i try to help a friend, i find there's not one heart i can mend
i try to make the right decision - since its me, i'm obviously wrong. everyone else has been right all along
no matter how hard i try to help out, there's always someone trying to fill me with doubt
sure, there's always room for improvement, but that doesnt mean you should find fault with my every freaking movement
i could perform miracles all the time, yet still there would be some mistake that someone would be trying to find

why do people feel the need to criticize my good deeds?

nobody's perfect so why is that still expected for me?
it's like everything good i do is invisible, its only the bad they see.
it's like they're constantly searching for a way to bring me down
well here's my new motto
no criticism allowed

[*GoThIc_FairY*]

hey i really like this one! Interesting.. and i could never write anything like that.. Its really good!

[Jeni]

I completely understand,
it's like not matter what you do, nothing is EVER good enough...

I really like the was you wrote it,
and thank you for posting it here

I loved it


love
jeni

[jessiree]

this is a really good poem
and i hate when all that people see is ever fault
great poem

[americanclassicx3]

aww im so happy you guys like it! lol

[Sarah]

Great poem! I like the way it has total truth.I know why people do that, it is because the have nothing else better to do, plus they are toally jelous of things you do, so keep your head up and get back to the good things in the world you do some one is bound to apprietiate it some day.