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Post by Sarah on Jan 6, 2006 19:06:16 GMT -5
I am a lost person I am a lost memory I am lost and I am now a nobody Every one says, "They see me and they know me." But do they? I changed the way I was I am a lost person I am a person who is said she is loved But the question is "Am I really?" I don't know what to do anymore just because... I Am Lost
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Post by *GoThIc_FairY* on Jan 7, 2006 21:31:14 GMT -5
oh my gosh... this poem.. i can so relate to.. Great Job.. I really like it!
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Post by arcanephantom on Jan 8, 2006 5:06:32 GMT -5
nice job! i liked the line 'I am a lost memory' for some reason that stood out to me and peaked my interest. many a person can or have related to this. i believe it is an essential characteristic to finding, moreso, creating yourself. deidre
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Post by jessiree on Jan 8, 2006 19:49:06 GMT -5
great write and i agree my fav line it "i am a lost memory"
~jess
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Post by mikethelemming on Jan 8, 2006 22:38:07 GMT -5
we're all lost at some point in our lives. i'm still lost, looking for the light at the end of the tunnel. good write, i enjoyed this
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Post by geminigurl on Feb 6, 2006 19:52:29 GMT -5
Great poem!!! Kayla
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