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Post by *GoThIc_FairY* on Jan 6, 2006 1:18:02 GMT -5
I know this is really short and may be totally dumb [glow=red,2,300] the art of breathing-- why do we breathe why doesnt our heart leave when it gets broken and thrown on the floor why do we breathe if we dont think we deserve more[/glow]
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Post by arcanephantom on Jan 8, 2006 4:48:00 GMT -5
great ponderings! sometimes we don't breathe after painful situations and sometimes we do the more painful and live, with torture being a side effect of course. cunning little questions! where would the world be if people didn't wonder and did as told? deidre
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Post by arcanephantom on Jan 8, 2006 4:49:19 GMT -5
great ponderings! sometimes we don't breathe after painful situations and sometimes we do the more painful and live, with torture being a side effect of course. cunning little questions! where would the world be if people didn't wonder and did as told? we are the future deidre
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Post by mikethelemming on Jan 15, 2006 20:42:27 GMT -5
nah, not a dumb poem at all. i quite liked it. short, simple, and to the point. as well as giving the reader alot to think about. nice write
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Post by *GoThIc_FairY* on Jan 15, 2006 22:11:49 GMT -5
i am glad you guys like it! Its not finished but i have had a lot of poem thoughts lately.. so i work on others
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