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Post by *GoThIc_FairY* on Jan 12, 2006 21:20:55 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]i want to find my sacred corner of to which i hide when i feel the weight of the world on my shoulders is about to collide when you tell me that you care are you telling me the truth? if i were to look would i see you standing there? when you say you love me do you mean the words you say? i need proof do i really need this heartbreak? do i really need you? i don't need anyone anymore because i am forgotten, invisible to this world so please just leave me alone in my sacred corner, where i hide.[/glow]
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Post by mikethelemming on Jan 15, 2006 20:25:04 GMT -5
you took this into a different direction than what i thought i was going to be reading. i like surprises, and this had lots of emotion that i could relate with. nice write, i really enjoyed it.
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Post by *GoThIc_FairY* on Jan 15, 2006 20:34:03 GMT -5
thanks, i am glad you liked this one. I wrote it one day when i was so embarrased *dont remember why*.. and all i wanted to do was go hide in the corner.. and now whenever i get embarrased i refer to it as my sacred corner... i know this isnt about embarrasment.. but thats what gave me the inspiratation for it
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Post by mikethelemming on Jan 15, 2006 20:38:38 GMT -5
heh, i can relate to that. i used to spend a lot of time under tables and under my bed.
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Post by *GoThIc_FairY* on Jan 15, 2006 22:08:43 GMT -5
under tables and beds? interesting! I would just find corners.. sometimes hide in the bathroom at school.. sometimes self injure. and all that jazz
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