I want to hate you

[*GoThIc_FairY*]

I want to hate you
at least as half of what i hate myself
I could tell all the lies
and get all the guys
just like you get all the girls
the only difference is,
you would hate me
i wish you would let me move on
past this dead end defeat
and never let this hurting repeat
all you ever did is cheat
and mistreat
and bring me down....

Ok, sorry but it is not done yet, but what do you think so far?

[mikethelemming]

i kind of like it the way it is. i guess you could exand on the ending if you wanted but i think it's nice the way it is.
very nice write.

[*GoThIc_FairY*]

expand on the ending? Ok.. i will try to work on that~ I am glad you liked it!

[mikethelemming]

you COULD if you wanted because it doesn't feel like anything is missing (beacuse you said it wasn't finished). i like it how it is though.

[*GoThIc_FairY*]

Ok.. I guess i should have said i would think about it lol but, thanks i am glad you like it the way it is! - I think i am picky on the endings of poems.. that is why most never get finished.. because i never think they are good enough

[geminigurl]

I like what you have so far.