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Post by *GoThIc_FairY* on Feb 4, 2006 2:48:21 GMT -5
Today my hero let me down because of what he chose, i wear a frown
He held me down, while i held him high he fell apart and then i cried
today my hero chose his path.. he chose to drink and drive, and crash
today my hero died today my world crashed my hero is gone no more of his lovely song will ever be sung he lost his voice he lost his choice
Today, my hero lost his life
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My Hero
Feb 24, 2006 16:17:24 GMT -5
Post by arcanephantom on Feb 24, 2006 16:17:24 GMT -5
wow! an intensely real poem. i loved how this was written. so tragic and just so raw. you didn't sugar any of the words up, you just told it like it is and how you felt and it was a heartwrenching real, really. keep it up. deidre
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My Hero
Feb 24, 2006 16:24:11 GMT -5
Post by *GoThIc_FairY* on Feb 24, 2006 16:24:11 GMT -5
Thanks, i am glad you like this.. i feel it is one of my better ones~!
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