My Plea

[*GoThIc_FairY*]

I havent finished this song yet. But please, let me know what you think of it !

[glow=red,2,300]V1--
what if you were to go
would i want to stay
would i ever be okay
or would i just fall apart
if you were to break my heart[/glow]
[shadow=red,left,300]v2--
tell me what i should do
should i sit around and wait for you
time flies by so fast
i dont want to live in the past[/shadow]

[glow=red,2,300]bridge--
Can you hear me
i wonder do you see me
i wonder if you even care[/glow]

[shadow=red,left,300][glow=red,2,300]chorus--
would my life still go on
if you werent here with me
I ask you to stay
this is my plea
would life ever be the same
or would it just be a pain
so please stay..
this is..........
my plea[/glow][/shadow]

Ok what can i do to make it better? should i put the chorus there and add like 2 more versus? or should i put it in between the 2 versus already?

[lucaspackard]

well i am sort of musically inclined (i play the guitar and do percussion fo school) and i think maybe another verse would be cool but i like how it looks now

do you play anything?

[*GoThIc_FairY*]

Ok that is what i was thinking--about the second verse. and thanks! Do i play anything? Nah.. i tried teaching myself piano and guitar..but it hasnt worked. But i do sing. Im in choir at my highschool.. one of the best choirs too!!

[americanclassicx3]

I LIKEY! <3