Hearts of Soldiers

[jessiree]

following orders in a far away land
each soldiers most vivid memory
is controlled by their hand
one shot to change a life
one thought through day and night
thump once heart
thump twice
thump, thump thrice
a split second seems like years
you have treachery, betrayal and tons of fears
comrades like family
though family is far away
thump once heart
thump twice
thump, thump thrice
deception consumes you mind
the weight of your decisions weighs in your mind
all of the sounds of bombs and screams
slowly fad away
your surrounded by darkness, nothingness
until your final day
thump once heart
thump twice
thump, thump thrice
when you come home you are forever changed
but your memories and decision stay the same
thump once heart
thump twice
thump, thump thrice

[Jeni]

wow,
i think you really caputured the situations going on in this,
i love the way you wrote it...
your words, kinda cut deeper into my mind here,
made me sad

i loved every word

love
jeni

[Jeni]

..... and again,
thank you for comimg up with this great idea for a catagory,
if you have anymore, just let me know


Thank you

Love
Jeni

[jessiree]

no prob
thanks for puting my cat. on here
and for commenting

love ya
~jess

[*GoThIc_FairY*]

Hey. I really liked your poem .. about this.. its really great!

[jessiree]

thank you all for your comments i like to hear what people have to say about my poems be it good or bad