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A Smile
Jan 12, 2006 4:29:12 GMT -5
Post by mikethelemming on Jan 12, 2006 4:29:12 GMT -5
It all started with a smile.
When the winds thrashed And hurricanes threw Debris across the sky, I found shelter.
When fires blazed, The heat melted steel, And burned everything in its path, My safety blanket protected me.
When all hope was lost, My unconscious body Was lost in a sea of misery, An angel burst through the clouds to save me.
Any and all adversity Can't dent this armour, And my shield I wield proudly.
Since I met you I've been lifted high and above, Away from the wreckage And into a field of dreams.
And it all started with your smile.
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A Smile
Jan 16, 2006 11:22:53 GMT -5
Post by Jeni on Jan 16, 2006 11:22:53 GMT -5
I loved it Mike, i think the wording is beatiful, along with the meaning,
great job
Love ya ~Jeni
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A Smile
Feb 12, 2006 6:20:22 GMT -5
Post by arcanephantom on Feb 12, 2006 6:20:22 GMT -5
oh my phantom deities! i love it!!! the description in the beginning was awesome and then talking about your salvation. it was all so fabulously written. and the ending line made a grand finale and a perfect and more than appropriate ending. beautiful. *i feel like i'm judging a figure skating routine or something:)* deidre
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A Smile
Mar 24, 2006 19:57:16 GMT -5
Post by darkangelofnight on Mar 24, 2006 19:57:16 GMT -5
I LOVED YOUR WORK IT GOOD AN IT ALMOS MADE ME FALL TO MY KNEES AN CRY JUST TO MAKE ME THINK ABOUT HOW MUCH IM AM LOVE AN THAT PEOM MADE ME NOTICE THANK YOU .
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